如何展示真实独特的你

大学录取的一般流程

卓越突出的申请人明显被拒的申请人录与不录之间的灰色区域

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关心的因素

学术和智力潜能课外活动、兴趣、天赋等个人特质

怎样冲出录与不录的灰色区域?

亮点Highlight

从各个角度精心策划,一个设计精巧,富有创意的开头,一种独到的视角,一个新颖的构思,外加一个意味隽永的结尾,都会让人意犹未尽。

一致性Consistency

从文书到活动,再到推荐信,要具有高度的一致性,应该能够体现申请人的特质。

如何突出我的申请优势?

你需要个性化的申请方案

我们追求用地道的英语精彩展现申请人的特点,将Be Yourself 和Admission Officers' Thinking在每一份文书中完美结合。这不仅极大增加了成功机会,也让文书的写作变成了与我们的用户进行心灵交流的一种仪式。Tips:Make a difference,赢得青睐 1、在制作活动列表时,可以把自己显著吸引人的活动摆在前面。2、对于自己从事的活动,进行尽可能详细的描述。 3、有文体特长的学生,可以专门制作一个能够展示申请人能力的简历。

时间规划及职业解析 头脑风暴 考试规划 专业解析 学术背景提升&推荐人选择 实习指导 项目研究&学校选定 文书创作 网申指导&套磁指导 面试/套磁培训 签证辅导 海外生存指南 剖析自己、挖掘闪光点,发现一个独特的“你”:针对学生在各个经历中的亮点进行挖掘,发现特长,并从中收集小故事。 向您介绍各个专业的历史、发展、国内外专业介绍、不同之处、该专业毕业之后的就业情况以及申请该专业过程中的注意事项,方便您结合自身特点申请适合您的专业。 剖析自己、挖掘闪光点,发现一个独特的“你”:针对学生在各个经历中的亮点进行挖掘,发现特长,并从中收集小故事。 详解开设相关专业的国外院校、项目信息,包括项目特色、课程设置、所在地理位置的介绍、气候条件、安全条件等。分层次为您剖析项目的录取信息、申请难度。
留学申请关键点是什么?

理工科文书该怎么写?

每一个留学人都是独一无二的,因此我们非常厌恶制作中文文书而后翻译成英文的落后方式。令人遗憾的是,这正是很多DIY申请者和留学公司无法避免的行为。中西思维差异而导致的中式英语和词不达意等弊病对申请结果影响恶劣,我们则会根据申请者个人特点和录取委员会的思维逻辑进行纯英文创作。我们追求用地道的英语精彩展现申请人的特点,将Be Yourself 和Admission Officers' Thinking在每一份文书中完美结合。这不仅极大增加了成功机会,也让文书的写作变成了与我们的用户进行心灵交流的一种仪式。这个过程,不断感动着参与到其中的我们并为此骄傲。

美国大学文书要求

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斯坦福大学 一项课外活动或工作经历 七个需要简短回答的小问题,涵盖
生活方方面面
与学术兴趣相关、未来室友 的信,以及开放性的三个问题
麻省理工学院 简单明了做自己 你的热情和兴趣 你与学院的匹配度 你最大的个性特点 背景与课外活动 遭遇过的挑战和突发状况
卡内基梅隆大学 Why school? Why major? 一年期间读过的书 谈一下你和面试人的交流

优秀文书展示

  • 卡内基梅隆大学

    This past summer, when my family was traveling in Scandinavia, I decided instead to fly in the opposite direction to Cold Spring Harbor, to study at the lab of James Watson, the discoverer of DNA structure. I was not surprised to be fascinated by all of the pure biology in the courses; I was not surprised to be the only non‐American student, and I was not surprised by the questions about why I flew half way around the planet just for two weeks in a silly lab. In fact, I am no stranger to such questions. People would ask why I spend time reading so many long and tedious papers when all I need is to finish a small report on yeast. People would ask me why I am dying to know how much of Pistia’s dry mass is made up of its hairs. I have no better answer than to say, “There is so much more biology in these little things and I just love knowing it. I am following my heart.”——JHU Tiandao2014 Common Essay 以具体的实际行动(暑期活动)展现了申请人对生物研究的极大热忱

  • 芝加哥大学

    Though drastically different in terms of language, documentary authors and Misty Poets share the courage to seek and reveal the truth, and the willingness to change the world through their own actions. I identify with this goal as an essential part of my own academic motivation. These artists’ courage to promote the truth despite the status quo inspired me to investigate Chinese stock market below the surface, to explore its flaws, and to shape my dream of improving my country’s markets through my own knowledge and practice.——Chicago Tiandao2014 Supplement Essay 将纪实文学与诗歌的意义与经济学的专业追求融合,并在文尾得以升华

  • 康奈尔大学

    I smelled the apple. The fresh scent mirrored my newfound eagerness. Two years’ study made me become accustomed to encountering problems. Change did not seem so scary anymore, no matter whether it was a difficult project, a new school, or a foreign country. I was eager to challenge the unknown. I would apply the strategy I had learned in the studio: to openly recognize my shortcomings and to make changes in single steps. Where I had seen problems now lay boundless opportunity.
    I urgently restarted my sketch. My subject: so vivid in my mind that there was no need to look at the model. Myself: so confident that there was no need to be worried about the unknown. As I drew, I repeated what has since become my mantra: “It is in my hands.”——Cornell Tiandao2014 Common Essay 用细腻的笔触描述了速写一个苹果的过程,并延伸至学习绘画中的成长

  • 杜克大学

    Yes, the enzyme, a catalyst that people usually overlook. We always seem to focus more on the reactants and the products, just as we prefer to admire founders and leaders, those who achieve great success and are in the ‘spotlight’. I struggled, just like everyone else, to be the “most” important. Now, however, I know that I prefer to be an enzyme, managing the dynamic reactions within an organism and keeping life healthy from behind the scenes. Explaining difficult biology problems to my classmates, volunteering to play the background music, writing the script for the school broadcasting station, organizing talent shows to make other people shine, I strive to be the invisible yet strong wing that helps others fly.——Duke Tiandao2014 Common Essay 学生用生物酶来比拟自己在团队中的作用,人生的价值和追求

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就业分析

理工科的中国申请者数量一直有增无减,很大一部分原因是:理工科毕业生总体薪资水平与“起薪”都很好,在未来就业“钱”景上并不输热门的商科。从就业来看,顶级名校、理工科、美国国籍仍然是就业的三大敲门砖。

另外,生物科学类、生物工程类、机械类等本科专业的毕业生的出国发展前景也很广阔。

数学、物理、化学等基础学科发展前景光明

大部分美国高校的基础实验室人才短缺,所以基础研究学科出国留学的同学很容易拿到高额的奖学金。数学专业的毕业生更是受到信息产业、金融分析业的特别关注,发展前景光明。

电气信息类申请人数多 竞争异常激烈

我国有很多属于E.E和C.S专业的本科毕业生出国深造,但是能够拿到世界名校奖学金并不容易,主要原因是这些专业无论是在国内还是国外都很热门,有留学深造想法的人数多,申请奖学金的人数也很多,竞争异常激烈。

土建类学生需不断增强 综合能力获录取

土建类专业的本科毕业生出国较为容易,发展前景也非常好。我国土建类专业的教育质量是受到国外各高校的广泛认同,加之求学成本较低,这就为同学们本科在国内高校就读土建类专业提供了充足的理由。

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